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 "That was two months before I left."
-"Exactly; he's been away eight months now. We've had a drop in visitors. And Jerricho has been away for a couple weeks, too. It's been quiet. And then you were dead!" She punched him, Griegg staggered a few steps. Raain being one of the strongest monks at the Mayheart Sanctuary, even a light punch from her was equal to any normal man's best try.
+"Exactly; he's been away eight months now. We've had a drop in visitors. And Jerricho has been away for a couple weeks, too. It's been quiet. And then you were dead!" She punched him, Griegg staggered a few steps.
-"Well, I'm not dead," rubbing his shoulder as he felt a bruise growing. "Heshtoredd," he muttered, and the pain eased.
+"Well, I'm not dead," rubbing his shoulder as he felt a bruise growing. "Heshtoredd," he muttered, and the pain eased. "Jerricho out on tour?" With a bit of a chuckle, Griegg returned to the conversation.
 "Sorta, he and the band were invited to play for Merran Kluh Ehs in Ayal."
-"Really?" The surprise, astonishment, and a touch of concern, were unmistakable in Griegg's voice. "She can be one of the Avel's best leaders, and one of its cruelest to those who anger her; have you heard form him?"
+"Really?" Griegg straightened up halfway through extinguishing a candle on a table. "She can be one of the Avel's best leaders, and one of its cruelest to those who anger her; have you heard form him?"
 "Yeah, his music pleased her; he was careful to not cross the line, or make it obvious that he was trying."

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 "Ok, so will you guys tell me already, why am I supposed to be dead?"
-"Two months ago," Raain began, with a bit sob somewhere between the memory of a terrible loss and the overwhelming joy of not having lost it, "We got a bird scroll report of a  murder where you were supposed to be, and you had gone missing. An arm and shoulder were found, and it was believed to belong to you."
+"Two months ago," Raain began, with a bit of a sob somewhere between the memory of a terrible loss and the overwhelming joy of not having lost it, "We got a bird scroll report of a  murder where you were supposed to be, and you had gone missing. An arm and shoulder were found, and it was believed to belong to you."
 "They could tell that just from an arm and shoulder? Well, obviously it wasn't mine, what made who think that?" Griegg asked as he lifted a drink in one hand and a piece of the cold giant-frog steak in the other.

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 "She's out front, Tedd, she's a great horse." And with a new energy [[Tedd]], the fox, bounded out the front door, still in his night wear, and embraced his horse.
-"I was so worried, Lemon; I thought you were killed along with Mr. Capita. So glad to see you, my girl!" [[Lemon]], the horse, was even more confused than Griegg had been. He unleashed his horse, and led her back to the dirty stables, and gathered some moderately fresh food and water, kicking over a trough of dirty water. "I'll bring you some fresh water. I'll be right back," he said to his horse as he bolted for the hose attached to the water pump, laid it into the trough and as the horse began to lick at the hose end Tedd clamped together the outer rings of the rotative repulsion magnetic pump crank to begin pumping water into the tough. When it was full enough, he separated the outer rings of the motor, breaking the magnetic field that spun the gears to run the water pump, bringing it to a slow stop.
+"I was so worried, Lemon; I thought you were killed along with Mr. Capita. So glad to see you, my girl!" [[Lemon]], the horse, was even more confused than Griegg had been. He unleashed his horse, and led her back to the dirty stables, and gathered some moderately fresh food and water, kicking over a trough of dirty water. "I'll bring you some fresh water. I'll be right back," he said to his horse as he bolted for the hose attached to the water pump, laid it into the trough and as the horse began to lick at the hose end Tedd clamped together the outer rings of the rotative repulsion magnetic pump crank to begin pumping water into the trough. When it was full enough, he separated the outer rings of the motor, breaking the magnetic field that spun the gears to run the water pump, bringing it to a slow stop.
 Inside the Inn, Talur was having to reopen the bar now that there were actually people wanting to drink for a good reason.

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 "She's out front, Tedd, she's a great horse." And with a new energy [[Tedd]], the fox, bounded out the front door, still in his night wear, and embraced his horse.
-"I was so worried, Lemon; I thought you were killed along with Mr. Capita. So glad to see you, my girl!" [[Lemon]], the horse, was even more confused than Griegg had been. He unleashed his horse, and led her back to the dirty stables, and gathered some moderately fresh food and water, kicking over a trough of dirty water. "I'll bring you some fresh water. I'll be right back," he said to his horse as he bolted for the hose attached to the water pump, laid it into the trough and has the horse began to lick at the hose end Tedd clamped together the outer rings of the rotative repulsion magnetic pump crank to begin pumping water into the tough. When it was full enough, he separated the outer rings of the motor, breaking the magnetic field that spun the gears to run the water pump, bringing it to a slow stop.
+"I was so worried, Lemon; I thought you were killed along with Mr. Capita. So glad to see you, my girl!" [[Lemon]], the horse, was even more confused than Griegg had been. He unleashed his horse, and led her back to the dirty stables, and gathered some moderately fresh food and water, kicking over a trough of dirty water. "I'll bring you some fresh water. I'll be right back," he said to his horse as he bolted for the hose attached to the water pump, laid it into the trough and as the horse began to lick at the hose end Tedd clamped together the outer rings of the rotative repulsion magnetic pump crank to begin pumping water into the tough. When it was full enough, he separated the outer rings of the motor, breaking the magnetic field that spun the gears to run the water pump, bringing it to a slow stop.
 Inside the Inn, Talur was having to reopen the bar now that there were actually people wanting to drink for a good reason.
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 "I lost my green coat."
-"Interesting," Raain rubbed her chin, mocking Griegg's and Talur's beards.
+"Interesting," Raain rubbed her chin, mocking Griegg's beard.
-"the report said you had gone missing," Talur said.
+"The report said you had gone missing," Talur said.
 "I left nearly a month before I had originally planned. Wanted to get home in time for today."

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-The light of the full [[Vialru]], and two-days past full [[Onalru]], illuminated the road into the warm, dusty Avel village of [[Berryshire Town~Cleveal|Berryshire Town]] in [[Cleveal]] of [[Væensal]]; the town streets were quiet this late at night. The [[Lights of the Alru]] were dimly dancing across the sky, and [[Illek]] seemed to be enjoying another feast of stellar dust and gas that found itself too close to the soul-eating black hole which guarded the night sky ever apart from the [[Roia]] during the day. The tall grass plains which stretched for many [[elics]], glittered under the lights of the night sky. A man in a deep blue, dirty cloak, riding a tall horse, which looked brown in the darkness of night, slowly made their way into the quiet town.
+The light of the full [[Vialru]], and two-days past full [[Onalru]], illuminated the road into the warm, dusty Avel village of [[Berryshire Town~Cleveal|Berryshire Town]] in [[Cleveal]] of [[Væensal]]; the town streets were quiet this late at night. The [[Lights of the Alru]] were dimly dancing across the sky, and [[Illek]] seemed to be enjoying another feast of stellar dust and gas that found itself too close to the soul-eating black hole which guarded the night sky ever apart from the [[Roia]] during the day. The tall grass plains which stretched for many [[elics]], glittered under the lights of the night sky. A man in a deep blue, dirty cloak, riding a tall dusty horse, which looked brown in the darkness of night, slowly made their way into the quiet town.
 Past wooden and stone houses along a cobblestone road, the clacking of the horseshoes echoed through the empty streets; to a large wooden building with stables near the town center, they walked. The only light in the town seemed to be coming from a thick sprawling tree in the park at the center of town. The thick trunk of this tree started in one place, as trees typically do, spreading in three directions, wrapping back down till it was half buried in the grass before rising up again in a new direction. Hanging from the tree was a single lantern: a light for the dead.
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 The garden along the path towards the Inn was unlit, and the windows dark. The cloaked man dismounted the horse, and wrapped its reigns over the gate post, and drew one of his blades. A sign over the door reading [[Aurie View Lodge]] swayed in the breeze--Berryshire was, however, not within any view of any [[Aurie]]. With sword in one hand, he slowly pushed open the door with the other. The Healing symbol above the door glowed as he passed through the doorway, shedding light across the entryway hall. The large painting of a beach was now lit just enough to think the waves were actually rolling in and crashing on the shore, wind rustling the trees.
-"Hello?" a small, tired, concerned voice came from behind the shell covered counter in front of a board of room keys; there seemed to be tears in the voice, as if in the middle of a sad nightmare. "M...m..Mr. Capita? MR. CAPITA!!!!!!!!!! You're alive?!?!! YOU'RE ALIVE!!!!" The lights came on, the young Hobb was now standing on the countertop, screaming with excitement. The sadness completely gone.
+"Hello?" a small, tired, concerned voice came from behind the shell covered counter in front of a board of room keys; there seemed to be tears in the voice, as if in the middle of a sad nightmare. "M...m..Mr. Capita? MR. CAPITA!!!!!!!!!! You're alive?!?!! YOU'RE ALIVE!!!!" The lights came on, the young Hobb was now standing on the countertop, screaming with excitement. His sadness completely gone.
 "Ârûn?" Putting away his sword, [[Griegg Capita]] looked very confused, as he removed his hood and helm.
-"You're alive!!!" Jumping down, [[Ârûn Bwein]] leaped through the air to his friend he'd believed to be murdered two months earlier.
+"You're alive!!!" [[Ârûn Bwein]] leaped through the air to his friend he'd believed to be murdered two months earlier.
-"Griegg? So this is going to be a happy birthday, and not an unexpected memorial." A woman with long red hair, and incredible beauty, and strength, dressed in red robes came down the stairs behind the bar.
+"Griegg? So this is going to be a happy birthday, and not an unexpected memorial." A woman with long red hair, rustic beauty, with a strong face and muscular body, dressed in red robes, came down the stairs behind the bar.
-Setting Ârûn down, Griegg Capita turned to the woman, looking even more confused than before. "What did I miss?"
+Setting Ârûn down, Griegg Capita turned to the woman, "What did I miss?"
 "Getting murdered, apparently." Came the deep voice of [[Talur]], the overweight [[Avgar]] bartender, "Didn't lose the limb, either. The alru were on your side; come here, you can't deny me a hug this time, we thought you were dead; Raain was a wreck."
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 Giving into the embrace from the much shorter Avgar, Grieg looked at [[Raain]], "D'you end up losing a brawl?"
-"Couldn't even start one, and your stables got dirty," she said as she hugged the stable master.
+"Couldn't even start one, and your stables got dirty," she said as she hugged her friend, the town stable Master.
 "I'll take care of it tomorrow, its tough work not getting.....did you say something about losing a limb? What happened?"
-By this point, with the noise of the excitement, and there suddenly being lights on in town, a crowd was starting to arrive. Mostly humans and [[hobbs]], but there were also two [[Vulswyn]], and a Chayas~fox.
+By this point, with the noise of the excitement, and there suddenly being lights on in town, a crowd was starting to arrive. Mostly humans and [[Hobbs]], but there were also two [[Vulswyn]], and a Chayas~fox.
 As the fox came down the stairs and saw Griegg, his eyes widened, and his tail and ears raised, "Lemon?" he said in a manor that only comes from being unexpectedly awoken, but finding that the reason is completely worth it.

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−	The light of the full [[Vialru]], and two-days past full [[Onalru]], illuminated the road into the warm, dusty Avel village of [[Berryshire Town~Cleveal\|Berryshire Town]] in [[Cleveal]] of [[Væensal]]; the town streets were quiet this late at night. The [[Lights of ~~Emiyl~~]] were dimly dancing across the sky, and [[Illek]] seemed to be enjoying another feast of stellar dust and gas that found itself too close to the soul-eating black hole which guarded the night sky ever apart from the [[Roia]] during the day. The tall grass plains which stretched for many [[elics]], glittered under the lights of the night sky. A man in a deep blue, dirty cloak, riding a tall horse, which looked brown in the darkness of night, slowly made their way into the quiet town.	+	The light of the full [[Vialru]], and two-days past full [[Onalru]], illuminated the road into the warm, dusty Avel village of [[Berryshire Town~Cleveal\|Berryshire Town]] in [[Cleveal]] of [[Væensal]]; the town streets were quiet this late at night. The [[Lights of the Alru]] were dimly dancing across the sky, and [[Illek]] seemed to be enjoying another feast of stellar dust and gas that found itself too close to the soul-eating black hole which guarded the night sky ever apart from the [[Roia]] during the day. The tall grass plains which stretched for many [[elics]], glittered under the lights of the night sky. A man in a deep blue, dirty cloak, riding a tall horse, which looked brown in the darkness of night, slowly made their way into the quiet town.

	Past wooden and stone houses along a cobblestone road, the clacking of the horseshoes echoed through the empty streets; to a large wooden building with stables near the town center, they walked. The only light in the town seemed to be coming from a thick sprawling tree in the park at the center of town. The trunk of this tree started in one place and spread in three directions and wrapped back down till it was half buried in the grass before rising up again in a new direction. Hanging from the tree was a single lantern--a light for the dead.		Past wooden and stone houses along a cobblestone road, the clacking of the horseshoes echoed through the empty streets; to a large wooden building with stables near the town center, they walked. The only light in the town seemed to be coming from a thick sprawling tree in the park at the center of town. The trunk of this tree started in one place and spread in three directions and wrapped back down till it was half buried in the grass before rising up again in a new direction. Hanging from the tree was a single lantern--a light for the dead.

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−	The light of the full [[Vialru]], and two-days past full [[Onalru]], illuminated the road into the warm, dusty Avel village of [[Berryshire Town~Cleveal\|Berryshire Town]] in [[Cleveal]] of [[Væensal]]; the town streets were quiet this late at night. The [[Lights of ~~Emyle~~]] were dimly dancing across the sky, and [[Illek]] seemed to be enjoying another feast of stellar dust and gas that found itself too close to the soul-eating black hole which guarded the night sky ever apart from the [[Roia]] during the day. The tall grass plains which stretched for many [[elics]], glittered under the lights of the night sky. A man in a deep blue, dirty cloak, riding a tall horse, which looked brown in the darkness of night, slowly made their way into the quiet town.	+	The light of the full [[Vialru]], and two-days past full [[Onalru]], illuminated the road into the warm, dusty Avel village of [[Berryshire Town~Cleveal\|Berryshire Town]] in [[Cleveal]] of [[Væensal]]; the town streets were quiet this late at night. The [[Lights of Emiyl]] were dimly dancing across the sky, and [[Illek]] seemed to be enjoying another feast of stellar dust and gas that found itself too close to the soul-eating black hole which guarded the night sky ever apart from the [[Roia]] during the day. The tall grass plains which stretched for many [[elics]], glittered under the lights of the night sky. A man in a deep blue, dirty cloak, riding a tall horse, which looked brown in the darkness of night, slowly made their way into the quiet town.

	Past wooden and stone houses along a cobblestone road, the clacking of the horseshoes echoed through the empty streets; to a large wooden building with stables near the town center, they walked. The only light in the town seemed to be coming from a thick sprawling tree in the park at the center of town. The trunk of this tree started in one place and spread in three directions and wrapped back down till it was half buried in the grass before rising up again in a new direction. Hanging from the tree was a single lantern--a light for the dead.		Past wooden and stone houses along a cobblestone road, the clacking of the horseshoes echoed through the empty streets; to a large wooden building with stables near the town center, they walked. The only light in the town seemed to be coming from a thick sprawling tree in the park at the center of town. The trunk of this tree started in one place and spread in three directions and wrapped back down till it was half buried in the grass before rising up again in a new direction. Hanging from the tree was a single lantern--a light for the dead.